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I tried to submit this information various times on the feedback form (https://www.lds.org/tools/feedback/?amp ... g:homepage) in both my Google Chrome browser and my Microsoft browser and the "Send" button in the lower right hand corner of this submission form did not work, or did not appear to work. After I filled out the form and clicked on Send button, nothing happened. Just an fyi
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Perhaps someone here can forward the following information on to someone who can fix a typo on the website:
I found a typo in a quoted poem by William Wadsworth in the following online article titled “Turn Heavenward Our Eyes” by Bishop John H. Vandenberg from the December 1971 Ensign (found here https://www.lds.org/ensign/1971/12/turn ... s?lang=eng):
"...And by the vision splendidIs on his way attended;" (this is the 16th line in the poem... notice the word "splendidls"... I believe this to be a typo... I believe there should be a space between Splendid and Is)
Here are some references from other sources that show the line to read:
"And by the vision splendid
Is on his way attended;"
http://www.bartleby.com/101/536.html
https://www.poets.org/poetsorg/poem/ode ... -childhood
In my personal studies, I'm on a marathon to read through all of the Ensigns. It seems I have come across a typo online before and didn't think much of it... but on second thought after seeing this one, it would appear to me that maybe I could be of some service in pointing them out when noticed. Please let me know if there is someone more appropriate to share an occasional typo with.
Thank you,
Bro. Jason Averill
Ririe 3rd Ward
Ririe, Idaho
javerill@avercast.com
I tried to submit this information various times on the feedback form (https://www.lds.org/tools/feedback/?amp ... g:homepage) in both my Google Chrome browser and my Microsoft browser and the "Send" button in the lower right hand corner of this submission form did not work, or did not appear to work. After I filled out the form and clicked on Send button, nothing happened. Just an fyi
.Perhaps someone here can forward the following information on to someone who can fix a typo on the website:
I found a typo in a quoted poem by William Wadsworth in the following online article titled “Turn Heavenward Our Eyes” by Bishop John H. Vandenberg from the December 1971 Ensign (found here https://www.lds.org/ensign/1971/12/turn ... s?lang=eng):
"...And by the vision splendidIs on his way attended;" (this is the 16th line in the poem... notice the word "splendidls"... I believe this to be a typo... I believe there should be a space between Splendid and Is)
Here are some references from other sources that show the line to read:
"And by the vision splendid
Is on his way attended;"
http://www.bartleby.com/101/536.html
https://www.poets.org/poetsorg/poem/ode ... -childhood
In my personal studies, I'm on a marathon to read through all of the Ensigns. It seems I have come across a typo online before and didn't think much of it... but on second thought after seeing this one, it would appear to me that maybe I could be of some service in pointing them out when noticed. Please let me know if there is someone more appropriate to share an occasional typo with.
Thank you,
Bro. Jason Averill
Ririe 3rd Ward
Ririe, Idaho
javerill@avercast.com
